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Post by Runningfoot on Aug 19, 2007 18:32:49 GMT -5
please, post the next chapter!
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 19, 2007 19:49:53 GMT -5
K...I'll try... *mutters* I work on...too...many...fan-fics...DeathClan 2...Hawkfrost's Revenge...Wedding Turnabout (a Phoenix Wright things I'm working on)...a Phoenix Wright Songfic idea...Debating if I make a sequel to Traitors Lurk and Heroes Rise...The two Tigerclaw stories I've neglected...BlueXOak...The badger parody...The Refuge (a Warriors thing I started awhile ago)...and my novels, The Bronze Knight and A Coming Darkness! *jumps into the pit of fire*
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 20, 2007 8:47:55 GMT -5
Chapter ready, but shrot. Still, I figure it's better to post short chapters quickly. Sorry the beginnings weird. I had some writer's block and it was a random thought that popped into my head.
Chapter Four
“Darkstripe.” Tigerstar uttered the name, venom in his voice. “Stop sniveling like a kit and get out of there.” Slowly a dark gray and black tabby emerged from the undergrowth. His pale blue eyes looked up apprehensively at the dark tabby tom, who glared down with burning amber eyes. “I assume you have a good reason for following me?” He growled softly. Darkstripe crouched down submissively. “Tigerstar, I need a leader. Someone who can get me out of here, and I heard about what you did to Hawkfrost…” Instantly Darkstripe knew he had said the wrong thing. “So you’ve been spying on me for that long, Darkstripe. Dearie, dear, I don’t like being spied on.” Tigerstar growled. “No…I…please Tigerstar, reincarnate me! I beg you!” The gray tabby yowled in agony. Tigerstar actually smiled. But it was a cold frightening smile. “It’s not that easy. And what I have planned for you is especially hard. But you’ll serve my son well. Do you know what I’ll make you become?” He asked. “A cat?” Darkstripe meowed, but he had sickening feeling in his stomach, as if he had just eaten yarrow. “No, Darkstripe. A weak little mouse. My son’s first catch.” “No, please!”
Mothwing stumbled into ThunderClan territory, ignoring the yowl warning the camp. As more warriors appeared, she weakly yowled, “Mothwing, visiting Leafpool!” Respectfully the warriors nodded and relaxed, going back to what they were doing. The light brown tabby medicine cat appeared as she heard her name. “Mothwing, what happened? You look live you’ve seen your Tigerstar’s ghost!” The RiverClan medicine cat shook her dappled gold head. “It’s worse than that. I have news very grave for ThunderClan and RiverClan.”
“Reincarnated? Hawkfrost?” Leafpool struggled to keep her voice down, her warm amber eyes huge and round with terror. Mothwing nodded sadly. “The only half-way decent thing about this is I now believe in StarClan…but I’ve also learned of the Place of No Stars.” She sighed. “Leopardstar’s training him personally…” Leafpool cut her off with an angry lash of her tail. “Hawkfrost was trained by Leopardstar too! How do we know that will help?” Leafpool asked, her voice going hoarse with fear. Mothwing met her amber gaze steadily, but her fear scent was coming off her. “W-we don’t. All we can do is wait for Hawkpaw to prove himself.” But then it may be too late! Leafpool cried silently.
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Post by Runningfoot on Aug 21, 2007 17:57:45 GMT -5
poor Darkstripe!
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 21, 2007 18:11:45 GMT -5
Revenge! Muhahaahahahaah! *realizes everyone's staring at her* Uh, sorry. I HATE Darkstripe. But at least hate him because of his personality, not lack of.
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Post by Runningfoot on Aug 22, 2007 8:17:56 GMT -5
yeah, he is not so great.next chappi!
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 22, 2007 10:30:32 GMT -5
And Bone, talk about another person who...*shuts up and gets to work*
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Post by Runningfoot on Aug 22, 2007 18:54:16 GMT -5
almost there?
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Post by Runningfoot on Aug 27, 2007 14:29:59 GMT -5
PLZ POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!lol, stupid flaming!
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 27, 2007 15:13:27 GMT -5
Well, REAL flaming would be something more like; MOONSTAR U STUPID IDIOT POST THE NEXT %#$%#@^$@$%@ CHAPTER!!!!
I started it, and I can probably finish it soon.
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 27, 2007 15:39:45 GMT -5
Short chapter, but it's something.
Chapter 5
Hawkpaw leapt on the mouse and killed it with a swift bite to the neck. He couldn’t help feel that it squeaked louder than usual, but focused mainly on the fact he had caught it. He had been an apprentice for one moon, and Leopardstar said he was doing very well. He scraped out a small hole to bury his prey in, when he heard a loud wail of distress. The dark brown tabby’s ears pricked. It was coming from the river! Quickly he dashed over, and saw a silver dark gray tom floundering hopelessly in the water. Hawkpaw was about to jump in when a voice said, “Stop.” It was Tigerstar’s. “Why? It’s drowning!” Hawkpaw asked. “It’s a kittypet and deserter‘s kin.” Tigerstar growled. “Brambleclaw’s already disgraced me by befriending kittypets and outsiders. You will not disgrace me.” Hawkpaw stood for a second, frozen. The gray tom’s head went under. The dark brown tabby couldn’t stand it. He leapt in the water with a splash. The current was strong; even Hawkpaw, a RiverClan cat, had trouble swimming. Undaunted, he pushed forward, toward the drowning cat. His teeth connected with its scruff, and it struggled to escape. “Relax! I’m trying to help!” Hawkpaw hissed. The dark brown tabby himself went under, but pushed up. He knew he would die, but he’d die saving a life. He hurled the smaller cat onto the shore. Then everything went black.
“How do we know who he’ll ally with Bluestar?” Hawkpaw heard someone growl. “We don’t, Oakheart. We just have to trust him.” A soft, but strong and wise voice mewed. “I won’t have my Clan be defiled by that scum if he turns traitor!” The first voice spat. He saw a blurry form of two cats: one blue-gray, the other red-brown. “Oakheart, please. Good or evil, he has an important destiny. We must save him.” The bracken-colored tom growled ill-temperedly. “Please, Oakheart. I gave my life to Firestar all ready. You haven’t given a life yet. I need you to do this!” The cats were becoming clearer, and this alarmed Hawkpaw, because he knew they were StarClan cats! But Oakheart touched noses with him and muttered, “With this life I give you courage and loyalty. Use it to be the best warrior you can be!” The dark brown tabby felt an intense, searing, agonizing pain. Then everything went into blackness again.
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Post by Runningfoot on Aug 29, 2007 15:53:28 GMT -5
nice!
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 29, 2007 16:10:26 GMT -5
And that's how Hawkpaw died...XD
No, I'm not that homicidal. I'm working on the next chapter, but my PC's being freakish...again. Fortunately, this should be easier to fix.
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Post by Runningfoot on Aug 31, 2007 20:02:00 GMT -5
arge!is he still evil?
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 31, 2007 21:10:51 GMT -5
I have 'plans' for Hawkpaw. As of now, he's mostly good, but still 'gray'.
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