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Post by Moonstar on Sept 5, 2006 15:45:08 GMT -5
Chapter 1: The full moon glistened slightly into the nursery. Wavestar, the RiverClan leader, strode in. "Vinetail, may I see them?" The gray she-cat asked Vinetail, a white queen with a long tail. Vinetail nodded, and Wavestar looked at the kits snuggled by her belly. Her gaze fell onto the smallest kit, fur black like his father, Skyflight, but with a paw as white as his mother, Vinetail's fur. "What's his name?" She asked quietly, almost breathing it. "Moonkit." The queen replied. "Do you think he'll survive?" She asked in a worried voice. The gray RiverClan leader looked uncertain. Vinetail could fret about the healthiest kits, but this one seemed very small. "Of course he will." She replied. Something special about him, Wavestar didn't know what it was, but there was something. A tortoiseshell strode in. "What's the matter, Brownpelt?" Wavestar asked. "Only one at a time please!" Vinetail interrupted. Brownpelt ignored her and snarled, "ShadowClan's at it again! They won't stop invading our territory! A few warriors defending won't help us! We must start a war!" Moonkit, smelling ShadowClan, tried to nip Brownplet's paw, but stopped as he smelled RiverClan. "This one will be a fine warrior one day." Wavestar whispered.
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Post by Runningfoot on Jan 28, 2007 13:11:06 GMT -5
cool!
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Post by Moonstar on Jan 28, 2007 20:50:46 GMT -5
Thanks, I'll continue later.
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Post by Runningfoot on Jan 30, 2007 11:13:46 GMT -5
okay!
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Post by Moonstar on Jan 30, 2007 12:36:27 GMT -5
Just a warning, it could take a while because I'm working on three stories for this site.
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Post by Runningfoot on Feb 19, 2007 15:52:07 GMT -5
OOC: okay, i can wait(maby)...
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Post by Moonstar on Feb 19, 2007 16:23:27 GMT -5
This will probably take a LOT of time though because I have some others I'm working on. *Zooms off to finish DeathClan*
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Post by Runningfoot on Feb 19, 2007 17:18:29 GMT -5
kk!
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Post by Moonstar on Jun 10, 2007 23:21:50 GMT -5
Moonkit did survive. He was five moons old when suddenly there was a fierce case of greencough in RiverClan. Vinetail, among many others, was infected, and the disease spread to the four kits. A brown tom named Spiderkit was the first of the kits not to make it. Next was the healthiest of all the kits, Blackkit, a pretty she-cat. Somehow, the weakest, Moonkit and Stormkit were pulling through, but the medicine cat Wolfheart wasn't sure how much longer they would. "Where are Spiderkit and Blackkit?" Stormkit wailed. Moonkit weakly looked at Wolfheart and their mother for answers. "They're in a safe, happy place." Vinetail weakly, replied, then started coughing. Wolfheart, her brother, immediately gave her some catmint, and one leaf each to the kits. "Come on, Vinetail. You can do this. You can..." The shaggy gray tom stopped as he saw Vinetail was comepletely still. He buried his nose in her fur, and lifted his head; his eyes squeezed shut and his mouth open in a silent wail of grief. Accept her with honor StarClan. And please help me save my nephews. Please!
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Post by Graybelly on Jun 11, 2007 17:31:22 GMT -5
It's alright, but I think the chapters are too short, personally.
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Post by Moonstar on Jun 13, 2007 11:55:43 GMT -5
They're short because I write them out here rather than on MS word or anything.
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Post by Runningfoot on Jul 7, 2007 19:00:00 GMT -5
oh, that's sad!
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 20, 2007 16:08:44 GMT -5
I never said it would be cheery. At least Moonstar's father doesn't kill of kittens. *coughRavenpeltcough*
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Post by Runningfoot on Aug 21, 2007 17:52:32 GMT -5
i know, right!
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Post by Moonstar on Aug 22, 2007 10:35:10 GMT -5
*sniff* My brother found out and he calls me a kitten killer. XD Erin Hunter's killed more kittens than me!
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