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Post by Moonstar on Oct 3, 2007 22:08:41 GMT -5
OK, first off, I want to say this: I might discontinue this fan-fiction, as it'll be rather hard to write. So don't get too hyped up about it. What is it? Lord of the Rings: Warrioratized. I've read the first book and I'm reading the second, but this is based off the movie, as it's easier to revise the movie than it is the book. I know the prologue's COMEPLETELY stolen from the movie's beginning, but I'm lazy. It began with the making of the great collars. Three were given to the WindClan cats, the fastest and most agile of all cats. Seven to the ThunderClan cats, great fighters and hunters of the forest. And nine, nine rings were gifted to the ShadowClan who above all else, desire power. For within these collars was bound the strength and will to govern each Clan. But they were all of them deceived, for another collar was made. In the land of Highstones, in the fires of Flamestone, the BloodClan leader Blood forged in secret a master collar, to control all others. And into this Collar, he poured his cruelty, his malice and his will to dominate all life. "One Collar to rule them all."Characters for now: Gandalf..................Moonstar Aragorn..................Swiftstar Boromir...................Shortstar Legolas...................A site character, currently undecided Elrond.....................Phoenixstar Arwen.....................Runningfoot Sauron....................Blood Nazgul....................Slayer (I know she's dead, but...I'm the writer. XD) Gimli.......................See Legolas If you don't want your character used, or have any protests/questions, post 'em here.
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Post by Runningfoot on Oct 4, 2007 6:18:08 GMT -5
cool!
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Post by Shadowleaf on Oct 4, 2007 17:24:18 GMT -5
Sounds awesome!
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Post by Moonstar on Oct 4, 2007 19:58:39 GMT -5
Thanks! I can guarentee the beginning will be awful, because I want to get to the good part so I'm like: Screw the beginning. Of course, some people might not know anything about LOTR.
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Post by Moonstar on Oct 5, 2007 17:47:38 GMT -5
The kittypet’s golden-brown tail twitched in delight. He crept through the grass in what he considered a silent manner, behind the black tom. Then he leaped through the air. The black cat froze for a second, then rolled calmly away. The kittypet yelped in surprise and hit the ground hard. It soon got up, spitting dirt and grit. “No fair!” He complained. With a mrroww of laughter, the black cat watched as the kittypet licked his long golden-brown pelt clean. “It most certainly is fair. Would I have let you attack me if you were an enemy warrior?” The black tom asked. The black cat was the leader of the mysterious RiverClan, that lived in the nearby forest. The kittypet touched noses with the older cat warmly. “I guess not. I’m glad you’re here, Moonstar!” It mewed happily. Moonstar nodded and stepped back. Despite their friendship, few cats that weren’t medicine cats had the privilege of touching him. “So am I, young one. That uncle of yours is ancient by now. Two hundred and twenty-six moons! I know kittypets usually outlive Clan cats, but I’m still impressed.” Despite his cheery tone, a shadow entered Moonstar’s piercing green eyes, giving Leo the feeling the RiverClan leader wasn’t saying everything on his mind. The two walked toward the Twoleg dens, sharing all the news in RiverClan and the Twoleg place. When they reached one house they departed, Leo going into his garden. Moonstar jumped into the neighboring garden, and prodded a dozy brown tabby, with only a few gray muzzle hairs betraying his age. It rolled over and muttered, “Go away! I don’t care how distantly were related. If I wanted to leave you something I would’ve already!” “What if an old friend wanted to catch up?” Moonstar challenged. The tabby’s yellow eyes instantly flew open and he stared at the jet black RiverClan leader. “Moonstar!” It mewed and touched noses with his friend. This time Moonstar didn’t draw back. “Greetings, Bailey…I mean, Oddclaw.” Moonstar corrected himself, remembering his kittypet friend liked to go by the warrior name he had given himself after his past journey with Moonstar and some Clan cats. Moonstar thought his name choice had been…unusual, but he accepted it. He stared at his friend in amazement, though a shadow of horror lurked again in his eyes. “You haven’t aged at all!” Moonstar meowed. Bailey, or Oddclaw as he preferred to be called, laughed cheerfully. “That’s what all the other kittypets have been saying. They’re disappointed, I think. They expect I’ll leave them all of my catnip mice and stuff.” He meowed, and lowered his voice. “But I’m leaving everything with Leo after tonight.” The RiverClan leader nodded. “You’re joining WindClan?” He asked. Oddclaw nodded, almost with some regret. “Yes, if Phoenixstar will have me.” The brown tabby sighed. “I’d like Leo to come with me. If I asked him he would, but he’s still a kittypet in his heart. Maybe someday…” Oddclaw murmured. Moonstar could see how hard it would be for his friend to live without a paw in each world. Suddenly the kittypet’s jaws parted as he sniffed the air. “Visitors! Not in the mood to see them. I‘m going inside. See you soon, Moonstar!” He growled, and squeezed through the cat door into his Twolegs’ den. Moonstar nodded in farewell, then looked under the bush that was Oddclaw’s favorite dozing spot. Moonstar stared at it grimly, feeling a mix of relief and horror. Under the bush lay a beautiful golden collar.
I know it's awful, but I warned you.
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Post by Runningfoot on Oct 8, 2007 11:15:56 GMT -5
lol, it's only exactly like the movie!
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Post by Moonstar on Oct 10, 2007 19:35:08 GMT -5
Freakishly short!
A few days later, the kittypet’s were all outside, enjoying the few precious days of green leaf left before leaf-fall. This was exactly the type of day Oddclaw had been looking for. He snickered as he jumped onto his fencepost, watching all the kittypets chatter and share tongues. An old gray cat named Smokey jumped on the fence next to Oddclaw and they began to talk, Oddclaw talking rather loudly for some reason. “Oof! I find it’s getting harder to jump onto this fence nowadays.” He meowed in a voice loud enough to be heard by most kittypets in the vicinity. Old Smokey was confused by his shouting, but figured maybe in his age his hearing was beginning to go. So he also rose his voice. “Maybe, sir. I’m havin’ some trouble an’ I’m younger than you.” Smokey commented. Oddclaw nodded and his jaws parted in a yawn. “Y’know, I’m beginning to think my time has come.” He murmured, loud enough to be heard, but still more to himself. Leo who was sitting nearby looked aghast, but for some reason his uncle’s wink didn’t reassure him. Sleepily Oddclaw went over to his favorite bush, and pulled out his collar in as much secrecy as he could muster. “Yes, I think it has.” He muttered, and curled up, as if falling asleep for the last time. Suddenly, the dark brown tabby vanished. Old Smokey was so surprised he fell of the fence with a thud. All the kittypets ran around panicking. But one cat remained calm. From the bushes in which he lurked, Moonstar curled his lip.
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Post by Runningfoot on Oct 12, 2007 16:42:38 GMT -5
neat!
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Post by Moonstar on Oct 13, 2007 22:20:57 GMT -5
Mwehehehe, Moonstar's evil. *silence* Don't ask why I just said that. It was a completely random thing. Yes! Non-boring part is coming up.
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Post by Runningfoot on Oct 14, 2007 16:35:08 GMT -5
woot!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Shadowleaf on Nov 1, 2007 20:17:08 GMT -5
Bump! ;D
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Post by Moonstar on Nov 5, 2007 18:40:40 GMT -5
I'll work on this as soon as I finish Hawkfrost's Revenge. I think I'll finish it soon, so I can start this before long.
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Post by Runningfoot on Nov 7, 2007 19:15:41 GMT -5
good!
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Post by Runningfoot on Dec 24, 2007 15:34:56 GMT -5
bump
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