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Post by Moonstar on Feb 24, 2007 0:20:29 GMT -5
Ah! *hides in a cardboard box and covers eyes.* I can't see you so you can't see me!
I worked on it today. It should be a shorter wait than Ch. Nine.
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Post by Runningfoot on Feb 24, 2007 9:16:46 GMT -5
kk!
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Post by Moonstar on Mar 6, 2007 17:25:52 GMT -5
VERY short but I finished it.
Chapter 10 The New Warrior Almost every cat in DeathClan was either slain or fleeing for their lives. The cat who’d be expected to call them cowards and demand they fight, was inching away, wounded. The four Clan leaders had found him and struck. He had barely survived the encounter and fled. The frightened cat was, Slink. Amber eyes looking frantically around, he saw one cat standing over Feather’s body, shocked. The traitor. Slink thought silently. Well, he’d need as many cats as possible to join the new DeathClan. Slink quickly worked out his plan. He’d get Ash close to him, looking weak. But he still had some fight left in him, and would give him a death threat. If he had to kill him, that wasn’t a problem. If Ash joined DeathClan, Slink would be better off. “Ash.” He rasped weakly. The dark gray tom looked around. “Ash.” The tom’s blue eyes met his yellow gaze. Slowly he approached Slink. “Ash, help me, I’m hurt.” The dark brown cat continued in his phony rasp. Dustpaw, or Ash’s, eyes blazed. “Oh, I’ll help you. Help you die that is!” Slink was bowled over as Dustpaw launched himself him instantly. “A coward shedding his lifeblood on a warrior‘s claws. That’s the only good kind of death, as you shall soon learn.” Slink glowered at his captor. “You still have a lust for bloodshed, Ash. They’ll find out about you eventually.” “Of course! I’m going to tell Phoenixstar, and Irispaw already knows.” “They might not let you stay with them.” That had to work. Ash would have to be crazy not to join him after that. But Dustpaw kept his paw on his neck. “I know. But at least I’ll be able to say I tried.” The thorn sharp claws unsheathed. Pain filled Slink. He rolled over quickly, knocking the dark gray WindClan apprentice into the ground. Dustpaw struggled out from under the dark brown cat, and leapt at Slink again. Slink instinctively flopped on his back, buffeting his underside. Though injured, he was still an expert fighter. Dustpaw lay on his side for a while. Then rolled into Slink’s legs, causing him to trip. In an instant Dustpaw was back on the DeathClan leader. “It’s over Slink.” And Dustpaw’s teeth connected with Slink’s neck.
“You would’ve destroyed your Clan without guilt?” “I would’ve. Not anymore though.” The traitor said nervously. Phoenixstar nodded. “Maybe so. But that doesn’t make it right. I’ve spoken to the other leaders, and they agree with my punishment.” She cast her light blue gaze on Swiftstar, Moonstar, and Shadowstar who nodded. Dustpaw closed his eyes. The WindClan leader said, “I Phoenixstar, leader of WindClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. He has trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend him to you as a warrior in his turn. Dustpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?” Dustpaw just stared for a second. Could he? Did he deserve it? Say yes, you stupid furball! Dustpaw glanced to the side to see…Cedartail? “I do.” He replied steadily. “Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Dustpaw, from this moment you will be known as Dustclaw. StarClan honors your courage and your loyalty, and we welcome you as a full warrior of WindClan.”
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Post by Runningfoot on Mar 6, 2007 18:11:08 GMT -5
nice! Fixing error
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Post by Moonstar on Mar 6, 2007 18:17:59 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Runningfoot on Mar 6, 2007 18:19:29 GMT -5
np, is Lostshadow's life ready yet?
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Post by Moonstar on Mar 6, 2007 18:29:45 GMT -5
I'm working on it, I think it's long enough to be a chapter, so I"ll post it.
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Post by Runningfoot on Mar 7, 2007 15:27:34 GMT -5
yippie! Is this story done yet?
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Post by Moonstar on Mar 7, 2007 15:43:55 GMT -5
DeathClan yes. Lostshadow, no.
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Post by Runningfoot on Mar 7, 2007 16:59:15 GMT -5
let's see, 15 golden leaves for Moonstar for the story!
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Post by Moonstar on Mar 8, 2007 16:59:15 GMT -5
OOh, thank ya!
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Post by Runningfoot on Mar 8, 2007 17:21:13 GMT -5
np!
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Post by Moonstar on May 26, 2007 21:51:52 GMT -5
Runningfoot, *sing-song voice.* I know you miss Feather, and... DeathClan: Continued may come when my PC's internet is fixed. Feather not dead. She main villain. Mega awesome deputy named Wildfire. Why Moonstar talking like this? All revealed in DeathClan: Continued.
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Post by Runningfoot on May 27, 2007 19:25:51 GMT -5
yippieiahyeah, yippieahohhoho!
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Post by Moonstar on May 27, 2007 20:22:30 GMT -5
I might have it out sooner, if I can print. My PC's in safe mode, so I don't have Internet access and I can't do much. .v. (the weird angry smiley guy I made. Look carefully and you can see him.) [spoilers]The following are major spoilers. Click at your own risk.[/spoiler] C'mon, you know you want it to be a surprise. Fine. Fire rains down from the sky and kills everyone. Did you know they took the word 'gullible' out of the dictionary? Y'never give up, do ya? Fine, take a look. The End.
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